There's a moment in my mind
I scribbled and erased a thousand times
Like a letter never written or sent
change everything you are
We drifted far away
Far away it seems
Time has stopped
The clock keeps going
and everything you were
And I never thought so much could change
don't let yourself down
and don't let yourself go
your last chance has arrived
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i was sure i had written a comment on this efore but now as i chek back a comment there is none, so i will try again.
the thing is that i was wondering whether this wsa something you wrote yourself in a moment of intense creativity, or if it was something written by someone else, and if the latter being the case, who the someone could be.
i find it very touching.
i have an overactive imagination. you may be aware of this. and it sets me thinking. when i read some lines, i imagine that they refer to real feelings and situations floating around in the writer's mind. and i feel convinced i know what the poem is about.
of course this is all fallacious and presumptive.
it is simply my instinctive response.
it has just struck me that it is probably a song. and i feel a little silly. although songs can be poetic. isn't it.
It is not a song but parts of two different songs stuck together by me to make something new you see.
So a bit of everything.
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